- Caitlyn Dougher, Cassie Herbert, Ryan Jantz, & Rita Johnson -
I. INTRO
Dom Provenzano is a Staten Island native, who has spent the last few years as a guitarist and lyricist in his band, the Secret Wall. However, recently, he has moved onto solo projects, focusing on improving his musical and lyrical skills. Dom has performed all over Staten Island and New York City, and has even had one of his music videos, "Did I Mention" featured in the Memphis International Film and Music Festival. Two songs in particular, “Coming of Age” and “Why I Don’t Date” showcase his abilities as a songwriter, as they differ harmonically, lyrically, rhythmically and structurally. His songwriting approach often varies, depending on whether a lyric or melody inspires him first. “Whenever I sit down and try to write something, it never works out… it's when I have that moment of pure inspiration that things click.” We sat down with Dom over Thanksgiving break to see what we could find out about this up-and-coming singer/songwriter from the big city.
II. INTERVIEW
RJ: So, generally, what genre of music would you describe yourself as?
DP: Some kind of mix of folk and rock, it depends. My acoustic stuff tends be more folky and my electric guitar tends to be more rock oriented.
RJ: What bands have you played in and what kind of shows have you played; what are some big appearances you made?
DP: My first band was called the Secret Wall and it was me and 3 other members - I was a songwriter, singer, and I played rhythm guitar. We played all around Staten Island and Manhattan. We played the biggest venue on Staten Island, which is the St. George Theater. We did a bunch of Battle of the Bands shows around the Island too. Unfortunately college brings people apart, so the rest of my band sort of went in different directions…
RJ: And you've since gone solo?
DP: So right now I’m writing my own music and its mostly acoustic, but I have a bunch of friends who play music as well so we make formations of our own band and play music.
RJ: So you can find most of your solo career on your website?
DP: My solo website is all on my website which is domprovenzano.com and the electric stuff can also be found there.
RJ: Didn’t you go to some kind of Film Festival?
DP: Yea, The Memphis International Film and Music Festival. For another one of my acoustic songs, "Did I Mention" We recorded a video in Snug Harbor which is on Staten Island, which is also where Lady Gaga just filmed her music video. We filmed the video and we entered it in a film festival in Memphis, because the song kind of has a country kind of vibe. It got into the festival so we went down there and they showed the video and we just answered some questions and did some interviews.
RJ: I think it's funny you can say you have a presence in Staten Island, Manhattan, and Memphis. Anyway, to shift gears a bit, can you talk about the process of creating an original song? Where do you start and what brings you through it?
DP: Well with the Secret Wall it was kind of a team effort between me and the guitarist. The guitarist would come up with a melody or riff and would then come to me with it and I would work off it, usually working in lyrics at home. For “Why I Don’t Date” it just so happened that my friend, the drummer of the band, had actually gone on a really bad date and sent me a text that said “This is why I don’t date”. I really liked that line and I wrote an entire story - much of it didn’t happen, a few things did but – I wrote down a lot of it and wrote it from his point of view. It just so happened that my guitarist came with a riff that I really liked, that intro riff, so I kind of condensed the words and made them fit into the melody and that’s how we wrote that song.
RJ: So its kind of a team effort, putting the pieces together?
DP: Yeah, for the band. But for my acoustic stuff, it's all myself. So I’ll pick up my acoustic guitar and I’ll either write the words first and I’ll kind of find a melody, but it depends.
RJ: So you switch off between what comes first?
DP: Yeah, but most of the time I’ll find a really cool melody I like for like "Coming of Age", which doesn’t have any lyrics, I’ll find something really powerful, that doesn’t need words and kind of speaks for itself.
RJ: And what makes something powerful to you?
DP: In “Coming of Age”, it’s a lot of volume changes within my own hands. I don’t need to use a computer for volume. All the sounds, all the volume changes are in my playing. I’ll play softly, I’ll play harder, I’ll play harmonics, I’ll play up the neck. I have direct control over the entire song. When I wrote “Coming of Age” I was frustrated because I felt like I was a terrible lyricist and I wanted to write a purely instrumental but meaningful song. I thought to myself, where do you hear songs that speak for themselves? And I thought, film. You hear a lot of music that in the background and accompanying what is going on. So I figured, what if I wrote a song for a film? I wrote that song “Coming of Age” as kind of my own wordless narrative, and as it would happen everyone says when they hear it “Oh that would be perfect in a movie.” A lot of people actually cite my exact idea: someone packing up, growing up, moving out, coming of age. When someone hears what I meant for them to hear, it’s a great accomplishment. But it was never meant to have lyrics, I feel like they would never work.
RJ: Can you talk about the basic things like the key, the structure, and tuning in "Coming of Age?"
DP: This guitar is tuned to D, D-A-D-F#-A-D, almost like a banjo. I got that from Mumford and Sons, a very popular folk band right now. I was listening and playing them a lot and I was in that key and I loved how you could play open and you would get a chord, which is a D. I loved how you can play one note on a certain part of the neck and strum and it sounds like a totally different chord. I was really obsessed with it and I thought it was perfect for my movie idea. The new change of tuning comes off as fresh, in fact the only two chords in the song are D and A.
RJ: But you embellish these chords obviously?
DP: I embellish and do different variations of the chords. In the studio version I actually added banjo and bass, the banjo arpeggiating on the D the same guitar line. On the bass, I had the bassist come in and we had different takes. We had one that was a little more flew with the guitar, like they went together, and another that was just a driving D. And I felt like the driving D was a little better because when the bass was in there playing its own line, it was kind of confusing and a little overwhelming so I cut that.
RJ: The structure of the song really isn't verse-chorus-verse, its more unique.
DP: Yes, I’d say it’s more of a piece rather than your straight forward pop or rock song.
RJ: So let's talk about "Why I Don't Date" and the musicality of it.
DP: “Why I Don’t Date” is in G. Well, most of my songs are in G because it seems to be the key that most fits my vocals. The intro happened to be in G and the intro happened to be the same thing as “Brown Eyed Girl”. There are no solos in the song because I felt like it was long enough. On the bridge, there is a little bit of guitar in the background that is just adding some flare but not enough to be a solo.
RJ: What are the chords you use in there?
DP: In the verse its G – Am – D – Am. The chorus is D – Bm – C – D. The bridge is C- D – G. It’s a really simple song but with the full band it gives it a really cool ska-rock feel. My guitarist has a really cool way of strumming that I’ve kind of adapted. He kind of slams at the guitar and does a lot of muting, mute strumming. **plays to demonstrates muting and strumming**
RJ: What can you tell me about your creative process?
DP: As for the writing process, it tends to come in big bouts of creativity. Like I just have a month where I’m super creative and then six months of self-deprecating where I just keep telling myself “you suck, you suck, you suck.” And there’s nothing I can do about it. And then I just have that one-month where I’m super creative again and I’m pounding out stuff left and right.
RJ: Where do you actually start? Does an idea start in your head, or does it start when you pick up your guitar and say ‘I’m going to write something now’?
DP: Well I’ve never written a song when I say I want to write a song. It’s just a really cool click. As for “Why I Don’t Date” I heard a friend of mine say that line and that was it. I just said, “that’s great…I have to write something”. But whenever I try to write something it just never works out. I might create something but it never turns out good. I just have these moments where I think I suck and I just can’t do anything and then when I have a moment of inspiration it’s like a really big click. So right now, I would say that I’m in a creative stage. I’ve been playing with friends and when I play with people, I tend to get a little more creative. Since the band left, I’ve just been on my own so it’s been a little harder. But when I have people to cooperate with and just play with, even if we’re just playing covers, it gives me a little bit of inspiration.
RJ: Do you prefer to write songs with a whole band as opposed to yourself?
DP: In my old band, it was just me and the guitarist that were writing. The bassist and drummer would just adjust to what we were doing. We would show them the song that we had and they would start playing and come up with something. So the one-on-one is just easier.
RJ: It’s convenient.
DP: Yeah, yeah. The two person Lennon/McCartney type of song writing…it was good but if you don’t have that chemistry, it’s not going to work. We had the chemistry in the beginning and then towards the end of the band, when we knew we were going to split, we weren’t really playing as many gigs, I wasn’t writing as good of lyrics as I thought I should be writing, so we were just going through the motions but the chemistry wasn’t really there. But I feel like if you have someone who is really willing to write with you and you work well together, then it’d be great. Working on my own kind of sucks at times. I have more freedom on my own but I just don’t have people to bounce ideas off of. The band’s gone and they aren’t the type of people to do acoustic music so I don’t really bounce my ideas off of them. I just do it off of friend’s that don’t really know music that well. I’m still writing my acoustic stuff, I’m just trying to listen to a lot of music and broaden my horizons a little bit and figure it out.
RJ: Top five influences
DP: The Beatles – they got me into music. My song structures, lyrics, everything is The Beatles. Then I would have to say Mumford & Sons had a big influence. I separate my music into two sections. The Beatles are what got me into music and then from there I was just discovering artists of classic rock. Then when I discovered Mumford & Sons, that brought me into a new era, well, a lot more indie, a lot more folk. So I’m not doing The Beatles so much any more. I’ve moved on to other things - a lot more Dylan, Jack Johnson, Strokes, Springsteen.
RJ: Well Dom it's been a pleasure - I think that just about covers everything, thanks so much for your time.
DJ: It was my pleasure and thank you.
III. ANALYSIS
A. “Coming of Age”
There are times when Dom just isn’t as creative as he’d like to be. One day he found himself writing horrible lyrics, so he decided to create an entirely instrumental track. And the track “Coming of Age” was born. This song is a mesh of a few guitars, a bass, a banjo, a steady beat, and a repeating phrase. The simplicity of this song really gives the piece its power. From the instrumentation, to the key, to the melodic lines, simplicity can be found in every aspect of “Coming of Age”. Still there is so much movement and growth that it can be listened to over and over again.
There is a main motive that is introduced by the guitar in the intro of the song, and all three instruments build on that same motive for the next three and a half minutes. There are one or two guitars always playing. There is a banjo that plays the same repeated accented line, which adds emphasis to the guitar melodies. And there is a bass giving this piece a bottom and a sense of motion. There is no vocal line or percussion, except what is played through the strumming of the guitar and banjo.
This song is in the key of D, according to Dom. The chord progression of the main guitar line is D – A – D – F# - A – D. The banjo follows along with the same D chords but plays them a bit more arpeggiated compared to the guitar. The bass goes off and does its own thing completely separate from the other two instruments but still finds a way to connect and keep a heavy downbeat.
There is an intro, which starts out slow. The main phrase is introduced with help from the bass, which takes its time to find a groove. The next section could be considered the A. In this part the bass, guitar, and banjo just jam out using that main motive from the intro. The different lines build on each other and grow into a larger sound. After the A section, there is an outro in which the different lines play with the tension and dynamics of the piece until it is finally resolved in the last few seconds of the piece.
Throughout the entire piece dynamics are an important characteristic and even Dom mentioned it during the interview. Just from the first phrase after the intro, there are so many levels of guitar each with a different volume. What makes this interesting is that Dom said “it’s a lot of volume changes within my own hands…All the sounds, all the volumes are in my playing.” Accents are strummed at louder levels, while the bass line stays low under the other instruments.
B. “Why I Don’t Date”
“Why I Don’t Date” is a song by our interviewee’s former band, the Secret Wall. In our interview, Dom revealed that the inspiration for the song came from a disheartened text from the drummer of the Secret Wall after he experienced a bad date. The actual text, “this is why I don’t date,” doubles as the hook and title of the song. The lyricism covers both fictional and nonfictional parts of the date, from boring conversation, to texting during dinner, to squandering all his money on a girl who wasn’t worth it.
The musical form of “Why I Don’t Date” can be considered as a standard AABA/verse-chorus hybrid with an intro and an outro as it goes intro-verse-verse-chorus-verse-chorus-bridge-verse-chorus-outro. Each section is pretty symmetrical in length to one another in addition to the symmetrical phrasing; each phrase is 4 measures long. The verses, choruses, and the bridge are all 16 bars long. The intro starts with the electric guitar playing a cool riff for 8 measures until about the 13 second mark where the drums enter followed by the other instruments. After the intro before the first verse begins, the 4 measure phrase that is repeated throughout the entire verse is played to familiarize the listener to the verse’s harmonic and rhythmic pattern. Each verse plays this 4 bar repetition four times. The chorus is the most interesting section because of its variations in rhythm and harmony. The last chorus adds an extra measure which gives the ending a strong sense of conclusion. Each new section is prefaced or ended with (depending on which way you look at it) a short drum fill that serves as a bridge between sections.
The intro of the song plays a nice 8 measure long riff that can be considered antecedent-consequent phrasing. The first four bars acting as the antecedent, presents an unanswered, unresolving phrase and the last four bars, acting as the consequent, provides resolution. This antecedent-consequent phrasing is played in fragmentation again at the end of the song. The main melody of the song consists of Dom’s vocals. The entire song is in the key of G Major, as explained by Dominic as the most comfortable key for his tessitura which is in the middle register of his voice. The range of the vocal line is narrow and stays mainly around the same pitch with conjunct steps going both upward and downward. He doesn’t make any significant disjunct leaps. However, the last chorus transitions from the normal pitches that are heard throughout the entire song to Provenzano raising the pitch of his voice to a somewhat scream, venturing outside of his comfortable vocal range.
This song isn’t too rhythmically complex. The steady and uncomplicated drum pattern—hi hat on each beat, snare on beats 2 and 4, kick drum on every eighth note except for beats 2 and 4 (where there are eighth note rests), and an open hi hat on the last beat of each four bar phrase—helps determine an explicit pulse in common time. The rhythmic pattern of Dom’s voice is pretty much the same with subtle differences for each verse. Provenzano splits the phrases into two parts, the first two measures contain lyrics and the last two measures let the repeating harmonic pattern ride out. Though the tempo doesn’t change, the articulation differences among each section of the song give the illusion that this is a multi-tempo track. Because of the smoothness of the guitar, the intro sounds a little slower than moderate. The verses display the true tempo which is moderately fast. The bass guitar plays notes that are both the duration of one beat as well as a fraction of one beat, contributing to the feeling of faster speed. The chorus is split into two 8 measure long parts differing in the feeling of the tempo. The first part, with its muted guitar techniques, is stripped of the constant strumming that is found in the verses, creating a sense of slower tempo. Then a punk rock rhythm comes in for the second half picking the tempo back up, helping the transition to the fast feeling verse. The bridge plays the same rhythms as the second half of the chorus but contains another electric guitar part with a rock and roll role in the background that Dom Provenzano says is “just adding some flare but not enough to be a solo.” The bass and the guitar are playing very similar rhythms behind the main melody, producing a melody and accompaniment texture.
The harmony is played by bass, guitar, and percussion accompaniments. The harmonic progression of the verse goes I-ii-V-ii (G-Am-D-Am); the chorus goes V-iii-IV-V (D-Bm-C-D); and the bridge goes IV-V-I (C-D-G). The chord changes come at every measure. Though the second half of the chorus and the bridge contain the same punk rock rhythm, the bridge possesses the true punk rock qualities with the classic subdominant-dominant-tonic progression found in much punk music. The harmonic motion of this song is interesting because the chorus is typically the part of the song that drives the tonic into the listeners’ heads. In this song, the tonic isn’t played at all in the chorus but is rather important to the verse and bridge. The contrast of the chorus is a change from typical harmonic progressions and expectations.
The instrumentation for this song includes a full rock band: vocals, bass, electric guitar, and drums. “Why I Don’t Date” fits into a funky, reggae, syncopated ska-rock genre with an upbeat and playful timbre. The variation in articulation contributes to this timbre, as the heavy use of the strum and muting technique gives off a reggae rooted ska vibe. In the outro, the last two bars are doubled with two guitars. The intro’s guitar riff is played almost legato in a smooth manner. The verses represent ska music with their fast strumming. The first half of the chorus contributes to the representation of ska by switching from mainly strumming to a more mute-dominated strum. The second half of the chorus returns to strumming, but with a different feeling, as it adds a punk rock element to the song.
IV. REFLECTIONS
Dom sat down and spoke about his creative processes, past projects, accomplishments, personal works, and inspiration. This interview demonstrates how different every band or artist is in terms of the way things like to be done. Dom’s former band, the Secret Wall, used collaborative efforts among each member of the band to create. It seems as though most of their works contain little pieces of each musician, which helps craft a whole and complete product. Provenzano is also a contemporary example of how music can still have effects without the use of technology—
“In ‘Coming of Age’, it’s a lot of volume changes within my own hands. I don’t need to use a computer for volumes. All the sounds, all the volumes are in my playing. I’ll play softly I’ll play harder, I’ll play harmonics, I’ll play up the neck which increases the volume and sounds. It’s so I have direct control over the entire song.”
He teaches us that in the midst of a technology-driven world, there are still ways to manually create without the reliance of computers. The last thing learned from Dominic was artistic work doesn’t come from force; it comes from natural inspiration. He explains that if he sits down and consciously tries to write anything, nothing will materialize. It must come from anywhere and everywhere, but nowhere premeditated.
Dom Provenzano has a flexible range of musical styles as well as creative ideas. Not only does he incorporate aspects and qualities from genres like acoustic, soft rock, classic rock, ska, folk, and punk music, but he also envisions his music in different ways. For example, his song “Coming of Age” was written to tell a story without words and let the music speak. Another song, “Why I Don’t Date,” differs from “Coming of Age.” This song contains lyrics and a comic and playful vibe, while “Coming of Age” has a more serious and contemplative feel. It is important to be able to communicate on different levels to the listener. The two recordings, “Why I Don’t Date” and “Coming of Age,” display his creative scope.